Ultima Thule
How far on feathered pinions can a mockingbird fly?
My window sill with its gray flaking paint
may prove too far gone
for your good intention stare, your ample supply
of sweet-eyed pity, the same that sees me now a saint
in versed-up words and brawn.
What once were mighty oaks out front are weeping willows,
dotting the fenced-in back, dropping still-green leaves in autumn’s
early near-frosts.
If through their brittle limbs you spy my cold pillow
and the late o’clock lump that rarely succumbs
to the daily cost
of pushing the elevated words on the rest and slightest,
then you will finally sense the flightless path a hapless crow
can ultimately accept.
I gave up my cage for a smaller tree and the lightest
air I could find. Find me at the ends where winds start their blow
and where never-to-be promises are kept.
My window sill with its gray flaking paint
may prove too far gone
for your good intention stare, your ample supply
of sweet-eyed pity, the same that sees me now a saint
in versed-up words and brawn.
What once were mighty oaks out front are weeping willows,
dotting the fenced-in back, dropping still-green leaves in autumn’s
early near-frosts.
If through their brittle limbs you spy my cold pillow
and the late o’clock lump that rarely succumbs
to the daily cost
of pushing the elevated words on the rest and slightest,
then you will finally sense the flightless path a hapless crow
can ultimately accept.
I gave up my cage for a smaller tree and the lightest
air I could find. Find me at the ends where winds start their blow
and where never-to-be promises are kept.
2 Comments:
This poem resurrected for me a poem I tried to write last year. I will post it--or what I can make of it.
This seems pretty metaphysical--in the Dr. Donne sense--yet it is still in your voice. I am not sure I can figure out the rhetorical situation--who isspeking to whom, etc.
I feel in it a bit of the same frenzy I feel as "Lit. Instructor" flapping wings--but I know there are things I am missing in it too.
I like this poem because I am struggling with it. I will have to read it more, more.
Hi,
I'm a random friend of Catherine's who checks the site regularly for her work, but found this and want to pass on that it is quite nice. Mockingbirds and crows well chosen--elicits a certain poignancy....
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